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I just finished reading this, and I can see why you’re excited. There’s an energy to it that feels raw and driven. The pacing moves fast, and it keeps the reader locked in. That kind of momentum isn’t easy to maintain.

I liked how you handled Richard’s desperation. It’s not just about the tech; it’s about survival, addiction, and control. That last interaction with Silas? Chilling in the best way. It makes me wonder. Do you see Silas as a full believer in what he’s doing, or is he just another manipulator playing a longer game?

Your work got me thinking a lot about control, who has it, and who thinks they have it. I write about that too, but through a different lens. More about how we create illusions of freedom when the structure is already set against us. Have you ever explored that angle in your work?

Also, I saw you’re reaching out to publishers. Are you looking for trad publishing, or are you considering indie routes too? I’m always interested in how people approach that side of the process.

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