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Nick Winney's avatar

beautifully bleak and dispassionate. Great work!

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Brian Reindel 👾⚔️'s avatar

Thank you, Nick! A rare departure for me. 😁

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Nick Winney's avatar

it was very different but really well done!

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Richard Ritenbaugh's avatar

It is interesting to see the "noble" justifications of all the sides, but they cannot see either their selfishness or their failure to produce good. We see that every day in the news and on social media.

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Brian Reindel 👾⚔️'s avatar

Thanks for reading and commenting, Richard! It's so true that we cling to truths that we think have moral or noble backing. It takes a lot of humility so that doesn't become the default.

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Gaby Brogan's avatar

This was fascinating - some real food for thought. Loved the imagery of him writing with the ballpoint pen on the water-damaged paper. And that rat-smell. Thank you for sharing!

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Brian Reindel 👾⚔️'s avatar

Thanks for reading and commenting, Gaby!

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