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Patricia J.L. πŸ‘»πŸ§ΆπŸ–ŠοΈ's avatar

Bleh. That gave me the creeps. Probably your goal, eh?

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Brian Reindel πŸ‘Ύβš”οΈ's avatar

Goooood, gooooood... thanks for reading and sharing your creeps, Patricia!

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Patricia J.L. πŸ‘»πŸ§ΆπŸ–ŠοΈ's avatar

It's reminded me of a Twitter friend's book that has giant bugs people have to battle. It gave me the creeps, too. https://www.amazon.com/bugs-Stephen-Drivick-ebook/dp/B00IBRL666

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Edward Rooster's avatar

This was awesome, I feel like I need to pop the disc/cassette back in and play it again, so many good lines.

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Brian Reindel πŸ‘Ύβš”οΈ's avatar

Thanks, Edward! There's something about these goofball characters that makes it all that much easier to write. πŸ€ͺ

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The Crazy Cat Lady Writes's avatar

This also reminded me in a way of Starship Troopers.

And having grown up in a semi tropical climate like New Orleans, where the roaches are HUGE inches long and fly, and LOVE to dive bomb you, it kindasorta grossed me out.

But definitely a fun read!

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Brian Reindel πŸ‘Ύβš”οΈ's avatar

Yes, now imagine two-foot-long cockroaches dive bombing and spitting acid. What a world that would be to live in! Thanks for reading, Kim!

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Renee Hale's avatar

I had a small cockroach playing dead on the floor this morning, and I will never see it in the same way again!

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Brian Reindel πŸ‘Ύβš”οΈ's avatar

By small do you mean two feet long and one foot wide? πŸ˜‚

Thanks for reading, Renee!

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David Perlmutter's avatar

Wow. Paraphrasing those old Trix commercials I can't ever forget seeing- that line always seemed prejudicial to me....

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Brian Reindel πŸ‘Ύβš”οΈ's avatar

I agree, Trix should be for rabbits, kids and space cockroaches! Thanks for reading, David. 😁

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njakins@me.com's avatar

Aww! I'm having a hard time consuming my breakfast. 😰

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Brian Reindel πŸ‘Ύβš”οΈ's avatar

If your breakfast starts moving around the table on its own, then I've done my job as a storyteller. πŸ˜‰

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Michael S. Atkinson's avatar

"At second glance, he had definitely fallen victim to a runaway cockroach who spits acid."

Dang. What a way to go.

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Brian Reindel πŸ‘Ύβš”οΈ's avatar

Poor Dale. I mean, he was on point with the BBQ fork, but just didn't have the wherewithal to continue the fight.

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jeff white's avatar

Jordy Verrill meets Gregor Samsa. Nice.

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Brian Reindel πŸ‘Ύβš”οΈ's avatar

Lol, that's an apt description, Jeff! Thanks for reading.

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January River's avatar

Fantastic! Very fun read! I read the whole thing with a little bit of a country twang in my head!

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Brian Reindel πŸ‘Ύβš”οΈ's avatar

Thank you! That's sort of what I was going for and for the novel I go back and forth with setting it in the south. I'm pretty sure that's what I'll end up doing.

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January River's avatar

Yeah! It works…you could do Appalachia too, or like rural central PA. Any place that’s a little off the map!

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J.E. Fishman's avatar

Nice! Very entertaining.

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Brian Reindel πŸ‘Ύβš”οΈ's avatar

Thank you for reading!

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