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Parker's avatar

I particularly liked,

“...hope is not a solution — it only gets you up out of bed in the morning so you can find one.”

I agree with SDG, the hard boiled city detective as outsider is well done, now i’m off to read part two :)

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Brian Reindel 👾⚔️'s avatar

Thank you, Parker, I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I hope you enjoy part 2 just as much!

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Claudia Befu's avatar

I really enjoyed the first part.

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Brian Reindel 👾⚔️'s avatar

Thank you, Claudia!

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ROB ESQUIVEL's avatar

I'm hooked; can't wait for Part Two.

Rob in Yautepec

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Brian Reindel 👾⚔️'s avatar

Thank you, Rob, I appreciate that!

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Caitriana NicNeacail's avatar

The feeling of being an outsider in a close-knit community is really well done, great read!

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Brian Reindel 👾⚔️'s avatar

Thank you, that's great feedback!

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