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Macy Lu's avatar

Another great installment, Brian 👏! Especially liked all the sensory details you included. "Slithered across my skin and up the back of my neck" was one of my fave lines.

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Brian Reindel 👾⚔️'s avatar

Thank you for the feedback, Macy! That was one of my favorite lines as well. 😁

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Claudia Befu's avatar

Great second part, very satisfying ending. And a well written story overall.

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Brian Reindel 👾⚔️'s avatar

Thank you for the feedback, Claudia, and for reading both parts!

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