Loved the story, Brian! The narrator’s voice really drew me in. I thought you nailed it! Also, the images you’ve created for your stories are amazing. Keep up the great work!
Thanks Justin! Present tense first person is my favorite to write in, but I know the present tense part does turn off some readers. It has such an immediate quality to it that I've grown to love.
I didn't realize it was present tense first person until I read this comment, and then it clicked! That's what gave the story such a different tone as I was reading. I enjoyed it quite a lot!
This story brought out all kinds of emotions in me. I was angry, sad my arm even hurt! Great writing Brian
Thank you, and thank you for taking the time to read some of my "older" stories! I like getting feedback along the way 👍
Loved the story, Brian! The narrator’s voice really drew me in. I thought you nailed it! Also, the images you’ve created for your stories are amazing. Keep up the great work!
Thanks Justin! Present tense first person is my favorite to write in, but I know the present tense part does turn off some readers. It has such an immediate quality to it that I've grown to love.
I didn't realize it was present tense first person until I read this comment, and then it clicked! That's what gave the story such a different tone as I was reading. I enjoyed it quite a lot!
Thanks Claire! It's definitely a tone that has gained in popularity over the years. I'll definitely be doing more of these in the future 👍
This was a great read! Reminds me of a book I read recently called Klara And The Sun. It explores similar topics around what it means to be human.
Thank you Ursula! Thank you also for the book recommendation. I read the plot synopsis and it looks great, so now I have a new book to read 😁