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Michael S. Atkinson's avatar

This was so well done; I was so drawn into the story I completely forgot about James until Sam collapsed and he intervened. Very good.

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Brian Reindel 👾⚔️'s avatar

Thank you, Michael! I was worried I let too long of a gap pass in time, but it looks like it did just the trick. James Webb, if that's his real name, will have a larger role in The Lewis Town Chronicles. 😁

Thanks for reading and commenting!

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Bryn Robinson's avatar

This was great, Brian. Like others said, I was drawn in and forgot about our mysterious friend at the end of the bar.

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Brian Reindel 👾⚔️'s avatar

Thank you, Bryn! We're going to see James again in the near future, but I won't spoil it. 😁

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James Ron's avatar

Wow, Brian! Very good. I always enjoy your stories.

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Brian Reindel 👾⚔️'s avatar

Thank you so much James! I appreciate the feedback.

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Stephanie Sweeney's avatar

This was such a fun read! Looking forward to more.

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Brian Reindel 👾⚔️'s avatar

Thank you, Stephanie! I will have another published tomorrow. 👍

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ROB ESQUIVEL's avatar

Thank YOU for sharing your talent with us, Brian:

So far so good.

Rob in Yautepec

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ROB ESQUIVEL's avatar

Well done, Brian: Keep 'em coming.

Rob in Yautepec

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Brian Reindel 👾⚔️'s avatar

Thanks, Rob!

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Justin Deming's avatar

Excellent story, Brian! Loved it. 👏

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Brian Reindel 👾⚔️'s avatar

Thank you, Justin! It went a little longer than I anticipated, but maybe I'm finally stretching my long form creative muscles. 😁

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Justin Deming's avatar

That’s exciting, Brian! I have no doubt long form will feel natural for you. Your next collection of short stories sounds like a wonderful idea!

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Colin Devonshire's avatar

Loved it.

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Brian Reindel 👾⚔️'s avatar

Thanks, Colin!

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Macy Lu's avatar

Enjoyed the small-town vibe, Brian! Also, I think James Webb is a memorable name choice. My first reaction was, "Oh, hey, my fave telescope!!"

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Brian Reindel 👾⚔️'s avatar

Thanks for reading and commenting, Macy! I haven't yet gotten to "The Little Robot Who Waited", but I plan to read it this week. I would love to see a submission by you to the Lunar Awards if you're able to swing it. We need more young writers to join us old folks. 😉

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Macy Lu's avatar

Sounds rad! I'll definitely try submitting. :)

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Paul Wolfe's avatar

Hey -- really good. As others have said, I was drawn in. It took interesting turns and maintained tension.

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Brian Reindel 👾⚔️'s avatar

Thank you, Paul, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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David Perlmutter's avatar

Great local color stuff.

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Brian Reindel 👾⚔️'s avatar

Thanks, David, more colorful characters to come for sure!

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J. C. Paschal's avatar

I do not care for stories centered on alcohol. Thanks

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Brian Reindel 👾⚔️'s avatar

That's okay, they'll be plenty more to read in the future. 👍

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