Thanks so much Tom, I appreciate it. One thing I've been trying to focus more on is a character's arc through a short story. While it's not significant, it does help people to invest more in it. Hopefully that comes through in future stories as well. Thanks for reading!
Thank you Njakins! It's always a challenge to figure out how a story should end. The great thing about this story is it reminds us to live the best life we've got now, no matter how long we live. Thanks for reading!
Brian,
I enjoyed reading the story.
J. C.
Thank you 😁
Great story, Brian! Congratulations on the honorable mention, too!
Thanks, Justin! One step closer to publication 😁
I’ve been saving this for when I had more time and it was worth it--as Scott mentioned, you did more work with character building and it paid off
Thanks so much Tom, I appreciate it. One thing I've been trying to focus more on is a character's arc through a short story. While it's not significant, it does help people to invest more in it. Hopefully that comes through in future stories as well. Thanks for reading!
Great story, Brian!
Thanks for reading, Mark!
Congratulations on the honorable mention! Good stuff!
Thank you, Jessica! It was a welcome surprise 😁
Excellent read I wish the story wouldn't end. Now I'll think of my future all day wondering if I too have a long life. Good job Brian
Thank you Njakins! It's always a challenge to figure out how a story should end. The great thing about this story is it reminds us to live the best life we've got now, no matter how long we live. Thanks for reading!
Excellent job. I admire how you are able to build characters in your work, you make us care about them. Thanks and good job.
Thanks so much, Scott! I appreciate that feedback 👍