Very cool. I wondered after reading this how it would work in first person POV, but you do an amazing job of getting under the skin of your protagonist even in third person. You'll have to give me some feedback on my upcoming story. It's 3rd person and it's fantasy. Two areas I don't usually hang out in. 🙂 I also think you managed the dialect and speech elements really well. It was just enough--without being too much--to get it in my ear. Or the ear part of my eyes, because I was reading it. 😂 Nice work.
Very cool. I wondered after reading this how it would work in first person POV, but you do an amazing job of getting under the skin of your protagonist even in third person. You'll have to give me some feedback on my upcoming story. It's 3rd person and it's fantasy. Two areas I don't usually hang out in. 🙂 I also think you managed the dialect and speech elements really well. It was just enough--without being too much--to get it in my ear. Or the ear part of my eyes, because I was reading it. 😂 Nice work.
Oh Wow! This is excellent writing Brian Love loved it!
Loved this, Brian! I enjoy your stories that deal with local legends. The characters in this one came to life before me!
Brian, this is the best yet! I love this one.