Excellent story. Reminder to live life in the moment of every second of every day. To always love and. To be gentle and kind and most importantly to forgive. The healing comes after forgiveness and accepting the things that are out of our control.
Thank you, Tom! I do feel like my voice is starting to "solidify" a little, and it makes me want to write some stuff that has a little more depth. Hard to do consistently, but I'll give it a whirl.
This story is going to hit close to home for a lot of folks.
Thank you, David. Loss is a powerful tool in storytelling since so many people can relate. Thanks for reading and commenting!
I love that he did not pass the gift of healing to who I expected. And the ending was pretty cool too. Well done.
Thanks, Carolyn, I'm glad you liked the direction that it took! Thank you for reading one from the archive. 😁
This is probably your best story yet Brian.
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. This definitely had a different feel, and I'm happy with how it turned out... thanks for reading!
Excellent story. Reminder to live life in the moment of every second of every day. To always love and. To be gentle and kind and most importantly to forgive. The healing comes after forgiveness and accepting the things that are out of our control.
Wow Brian, this is really a side to your writing I haven't seen before. Nice job
Thank you, Tom! I do feel like my voice is starting to "solidify" a little, and it makes me want to write some stuff that has a little more depth. Hard to do consistently, but I'll give it a whirl.
Very touching. Great job, Brian!
Thanks, Mark, and thanks for reading!
Excellent Story. I loved the old woman with the walker.
Thanks, Scott! She brought a little levity to an otherwise heavier story 😁