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Justin Deming's avatar

I tensed up while journeying into the shed for the first time. Ominous, suspenseful, and beautifully written!

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Brian Reindel 👾⚔️'s avatar

Thanks Justin! This one was fun to write 🙂

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Scott Ocamb's avatar

I just read this in your book and thought I would comment on it here. I knew someting terrible was going to happen, and read through it quickly to see. I am about half way through the book and this is one of my favorite's so far.

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Brian Reindel 👾⚔️'s avatar

Thanks for letting me know, Scott! I enjoyed writing this, and I revisit it from time to time, so that I think about how I can structure stories in the future. Thank you for your support!

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Njakins's avatar

Hauntingly beautiful now we know why the father was so trapped and not able to escape. The demons that lived in his mind. Will the demons live forever Generations to come? Who will be able to break this bondage and who has the strength to confront such visions?

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