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Joseph L. Wiess's avatar

Don't awaken the old gods for thou art squishy and beneath consideration.

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Brian Reindel 👾⚔️'s avatar

Considered just enough to be squished. 🤣 Thanks for reading and commenting, Joseph!

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jeff white's avatar

Cool story. Might "Ammoth" have derived from "Mammoth"?

I love the craft you've brought to this story.

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Brian Reindel 👾⚔️'s avatar

Thanks, Jeff! I came across a concept called "thisness" recently. It has a fancy Latin name, but essentially it grounds the reader in a present time and place. I've been trying to do more of that.

Also, I've been reading "Shatterday", and wow, I'm loving it. So, thanks for the recommendation!

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jeff white's avatar

Okay, I meant "I love the craft" in this literal way, and indeed your "thisness" speaks to that craft. You are the only writer I know who is conscious working on these things. Bravo!

But I also meant it perhaps more subtly, sort of slipping "Lovecraft" into the sentence.

I'm glad if you find Ellison to be rewarding.

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Brian Reindel 👾⚔️'s avatar

🤣 I'm so dense, I didn't even catch that Lovecraft reference. Also, yes, I did derive Ammoth from Mammoth!

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jeff white's avatar

Not remotely dense.

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Randall Hayes's avatar

"the claws of obsolescence" was my favorite phrase

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Brian Reindel 👾⚔️'s avatar

Thank you, Randall, I'm glad you enjoyed it! 😁

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David Perlmutter's avatar

"Michigan seems like a dream to me now..."

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Brian Reindel 👾⚔️'s avatar

If that's a dream, I would hate to see your nightmare 😬

Thanks for reading, David!

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Nick Winney's avatar

aaaargh! it's too short!!! more! we wants it!

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Brian Reindel 👾⚔️'s avatar

Haha, thanks, Nick! This one I definitely could have added a whole lot more, but decided to keep it tight. Thanks for reading!

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